Feedback for my confusing beginning of my story?

That's not confusing at all. Basically the little girl can't feel emotion, That's pretty messed up, But it's a good way to start off a story:)

Poetry advice, help, criticism :]?

Hi. lovely poem, with strong feelings and emotions. i love your creative style, your words choices and topics is awesome. you have a vivid poetic persona. Good job keep it up.

What do you think of the beginning of my story?

I completely disagree about giving your age. Writing changes with time. I wanted to tell you that you have an enormous writing talent. I am 55 years old, yet your story kept my attention. It made me wish I could read more of it. I do not agree with all criticisms in the one letter. That person should be reading your story on YOUR level. I knew the moment I read it, that you have a very promising future. My criticism would be your use of the word "terror" so soon in your story. Terror is a very strong word. I thought she was sitting in a tree to escape some horrible, menacing creature on the ground. If she is terrified that she will never escape her life of poverty and drudgery, that word could be used much later... perhaps as a response to a nightmare. I believe I am well-qualified to critique your story. You'd be surprised... Please don't stop. Be very careful about putting your writing on here and asking opinions. We writers are very sensitive, and the other letter can crush the life out of a young and promising writer. I know from whence I speak. I am forced to write to you from my phone, or I would say more. For your age, you have displayed a brilliant ability to write. Congratulations and keep at it. Pay close attention in your English classes. You are going to get better and better. I promise.

Sims 3 Teleport out of Hospital?

Hello, my pregnant vampire sim goes in to the hospital and teleports back out then automatically goes back in and the cycle continues. I have ambitions, world adventures, High tech, fast track and late night. Please help :(

Should I leave my Church?

There are a lot of churches so you could probably find one that you like better. If this has been going on for so long, it might be time to look for a new one. You don't have to make a clean break or a huge decision all at once. You could just start trying out different ones and not sever ties with your current one unless you find one that suits you better.

Is it normal that my period is lasting longer than usual?

I have not lost or gained any weight. My cycle is 28 days with a 4 day period for the past 4 years, never any problems. I am not stressed at all since I am on summer break and relaxing. No other major changes. I also have begun to use super rather than regular tampons, which had done the job well for a long time.

What's the purpose of lipliner?

Lip liner is used to make your lips fuller when you outline them and use the SAME COLOR lipstick. You can also use a lipliner All over your lips without a lipstick. Lipsticks shoul do the job with coloring your lips without neutralizing the lip efore hand.